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Nude_Rat_Voodoo
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Registered: Feb 2003
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None#61

I was told to give y'all some poetry, cuz y'all love it.. this is something that...I..uh.. wrote in the middle of the nite, more or less, on the back of a drawing for my friend for his 17th b-day...here goes...#61 in a set of currently 66....

None#61
Life is confusing
People seem to have nothing better to do
Then play games
The brutal way they can treat us
Is abusing
My soul can hardly take the blows
But I know that I deal my own
I wish I knew what was a game
And what was real
Like, the freedom
To let someone I care about
Know how I feel
But jealousies and games
Get in the way
So I am stuck in these fallacies of wishes
Left to wander my brain

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ThE iTsEy BiTsEy SpIdEr WeNt Up ThE wAtEr SpOuT.
DoWn CaMe ThE rAiN aNd WaShEd ThE sPiDeR oUt.
Up CaMe ThE sUn AnD dRiEd Up AlL tHe RaIn.
AnD.
ThE iTsEy BiTsEy SpIdEr... DIED

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02-13-2003 09:04 PM

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Kayla
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did he smack you?

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Caffeine
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Post your set!
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What?

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Your poem is confusing
Did you have nothing better to do?

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A.D.H.D
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Registered: Jan 2001
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Post the other 60 odd, please.

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Nude_Rat_Voodoo
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Mmm, the poem is more or less kinda to/about my dad, but the dream it came from was about my friend... A.D., I'll post them all eventually if you give me the time.. they'll be up on a site soon too... its nearly 70 now.... (poetry and art is what I do, like, ALLLL day)

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ThE iTsEy BiTsEy SpIdEr WeNt Up ThE wAtEr SpOuT.
DoWn CaMe ThE rAiN aNd WaShEd ThE sPiDeR oUt.
Up CaMe ThE sUn AnD dRiEd Up AlL tHe RaIn.
AnD.
ThE iTsEy BiTsEy SpIdEr... DIED

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02-20-2003 09:00 PM

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Kayla
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lord help us. please don't post the rest. dont post the rest. oh shit, youve started already!

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Roshigoth
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Location: Los Angeles, CA
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I'm not going to say anything about the poetry. Hell, I didn't even read it. I tend to stay away from written posts in here, but I just want to mention that if you do continue to post the rest of your poems, please don't post 70 different threads. Put the rest in the same threads.

Thanks.

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