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Aydin
Rice King

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Art Autumn Haiku

Smell of upturned dirt
Chainsaw meets sprawling tree root
Then pour new sidewalk

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Mordecai
destractivegodofdarkness

Registered: Jan 2001
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Watching the beautiful city out your window again?

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Aydin
Rice King

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Front of smoking spot
Parks Department van
Damn union labor.

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yMQ
slow, takin it easy

Registered: Jul 2000
Location: Texas
Posts: 1374

Autumn leaves may fall,
onto my cars fresh wax job,
goddamn residue.

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philjit
Arch-Enemy of Idealism

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cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt
cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt
cunt cunt cunt cunt BEEP!

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Mordecai
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What do cunts have to with autumn?

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missphinx
Edgy the Budgie

Registered: Jul 2000
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Plastic bats and skulls
Gaudy aisles selling death
Christmas angels scream

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Roshigoth
The Cheesemeister

Registered: Aug 2000
Location: Los Angeles, CA
Posts: 15124

Welcome September!
Tourists have finally left.
Life is good once more.

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cw
cuntacular wench

Registered: Apr 2003
Location: . o O
Posts: 6373

yuku ware ni
todomaru nare ni
aki futatsu

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I am going
you're staying
two autumns for us
SHIKI

See ... the heavy leaf
on the silent windless day ...
falls of its own will
BONCHO

Outside a sharp wind
Inside the fire embers glow
Where the fuck's my coat?
cw

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philjit
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quote:
Originally posted by Mordecai
What do cunts have to with autumn?

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not a lot. Was it a necessity that the haiku be about Autumn? Doesn''t writing it in Autumn count for anything?

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morgana
THE Bitch

Registered: Jul 2000
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phil likes to write "cunt"
over and over again
performance problems?

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philjit
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an interesting analysis, but you have missed the juxtaposition of the "BEEP!"

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MstrG
The Talamasca

Registered: Jul 2000
Location: Upstate NY
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Rake into a pile
Rushing headlong then jumping
Dog shit underneath.

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Mugtoe
Cuddly Puppy

Registered: Oct 2001
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Loring Park aflame
against approaching winter
Indians vanish

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quote:
Originally posted by Mugtoe
Indians vanish


like an old oak table

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Vegas
Vote Long for President

Registered: Feb 2001
Location: Boston
Posts: 6569

Shorts traded for pants
I would rather wear no pants
And now girls wear more

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Mugtoe
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Whither goest warmth
amidst such riotous hues
and vulgar displays?

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Mordecai
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quote:
Originally posted by MstrG
Rake into a pile
Rushing headlong then jumping
Dog shit underneath.


WINNER!

Nice one G

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quote:
Originally posted by Mugtoe
and vulgar displays?


of power?

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Mordecai
destractivegodofdarkness

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What are you, some kind of pantera fan?

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philjit
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might've been

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