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Mugtoe
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Is that the beginning of something, or an entire piece? Either way i liked it; nice attention to detail. The radio voice/ smell metaphore is pretty clever, too.
Born a yankee, and having lived five years in both Buffalo and Dallas I'd have to say that it would take a pecular person to hate Dallas more than Buffalo.

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I reckon peculiar is one way a puttin it.

I don't know what it is, really. I just found it in My Documents and thought I'd stick it here.

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I don't know what it is, really. I just found it in My Documents and thought I'd stick it here.

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Mine. I did write it, and I remember it. I just don't remember when I wrote it or where I was goin with it.

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"The radio on the receiving dock kept him company when the compressor wasn’t kicking in."

Very nice! That brought a little tear to my eye.

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